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Re: I Should Have Stayed
Hi there! First off, I love the emotions portrayed in this piece- it's very real and relatable. It also looks to be in place spelling and grammar wise, so good ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Touched
Hi there, Man, this was deep. Like, really, really deep. The overall feel of this poem was very raw and it possessed this sensational edge that gave me the chills. ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Ode To My Girlfriends Fish
Hi there, This was amusing to read. It's simplicity was what made it a good piece of writing, so for that I congratulate you. Everything seems to be in order ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Willow Tree
Hi there! I very much enjoyed this poem! Silently they wish for more Upon some Island, some distant shore And so it weeps, and so it cries -This all reads ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Constant Babbling
Hi There! Romantic stories are my favourite... they may seem cliche or cheesy to other people, but I love them. So if you ever need someone to help you with ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Struggling
Hi there! This poem has some amazing imagery. And as the words fall onto paper, I can feel my heart breaking. -That's my favourite part. Beautiful job, not much to ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Eyes
Hi there, Wow, this was...wow. I really was touched by this. It was short and raw, and conveyed your message perfectly. In my opinion, there's nothing to edit content wise- ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Hardships: This is Our Story (Chapter 1)
Hi there! I admit, as I was reading, I hadn't a clue as to what show this was based off of, but then I read in the novel description that ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Saxophones in Fall
Hi there! The title immediately caught my attention, mainly because I play the saxophone and so I became curious. Anything I might've suggested has been said in earlier reviews, so ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: The Strength of Family
Hi there! I absolutely love the message of this story, and it was very touching overall. The only thing I might suggest is adding some more details about the situation ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: The Sleepless Tale
Hi there, so... I'm kind of at a loss for words but I think what I am getting at is that this story is very... clever. I wasn't sure what ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Trouble in the Air
Hi there! Any grammar corrections I would've made have already been mentioned, and I don't have anything to critique. I just wanted to say that this was comical and I ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Shattered Hearts
Hi there! So, I like what you've written here, it's a very captivating idea and I hope there's more!... I didn't notice any spelling or grammar either, unless I missed ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: The chair lesson
Hi There :) So, Let me start off by saying I very much enjoyed this short story. Here are some things I particularly liked: Back then, the chair had been ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: Finding strength
Hi there! So, as short as this may be, I am stunned by the emotions I feel by reading this. I don't really know where to start... I think the ...
Sep 15, 2011
