brent213

Lovely! What a delicious sense of longing and loneliness. Repeating "I am a lighthouse" really worked for me. It made me think of the lighthouse light spinning in a circle. ...

Your story seems like a snapshot of a moment of despair. You nicely capture a feeling of hopelessness and self-deception. I like your paragraph Who gave them license to smile? ...

This poem leaves me with a wonderful sense of confusion. For me, that sense of confusion lifted on the last line, like a fog suddenly dissipating. I wasn't sure what ...