break~my~heart

oooh :smt060 LOL what's the series called?

Heya! That was great. Especially since I know what it's about. You're a great writer. Way better than me, so you have to help me out sometime! I need advice ...

I really liked this. I couldn't spot any nitpicks. (but then again its almost midnight. I'll double check in the morning.) You did a great job with detail. The only ...

I really liked this. I couldn't spot any nitpicks. (but then again its almost midnight. I'll double check in the morning.) You did a great job with detail. The only ...

thanks again :D get right on it :wink: til then XoXo~AsH

thank you everyone!! Let the editing begin! :smt115 (garsh these emotithingies are addicting!! :D )

wow this is really good! i dont think i have aything that i want changed... unless maybe making the suspense last a little longer. all in all, its very good. ...

ps: as you can see, i'm not exactly the best at giving a review. :roll: sorry about that. lol

thank you everyone :) :) :)

thanks for all the advice!! I will definitely edit it and post it again for you guys :)

wow. that was really good. usually, when I read poetry, it's only because I started it and make myself finish it. only occasionally do I actually enjoy the whole thing. ...