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Re: The universe on top of me
ooh, I liked that alot!!! It was so cool that it was spanish too!! You're really good at writing. Keep posting stuff so I can read! Lol :D Darn.... This ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: poem
ugh giving reviews is the worst part :( well, here we go: Overall, it was a good poem. It had potential....but, it was kinda just like every other emo, hurting, ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Music, the freedom of the soul
wow. just wow... that was purely amazing! there is not much to critique except the third line of the first stanza. it says something about classical music, however, that is ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Orange Cat
She stalks. She springs. And with her brings A breath of midnight air. This verse is doom for rhythm of the poem so far... With prey in jaw She turns ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Water Willies
ok, i'm new on here, so i feel kinda weird critiquing someone else but i'm supposed to, so here goes: :wink: the way you described the island in your poem, ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: OH Finland
OW mean OUCH! like if you hurt yourself...you might say it :) and OH is probably what you meant to say in your poem unless Finland was hurting you. lol ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: True Happiness
that was honestly one of the best poems I've ever read! ugh here I go again...I can never find anything wrong with the stuff I read! anyways, it expressed what ...
Dec 18, 2008