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Thanks Catalyn for your review I'm going to try and make a few adjustments to Suzie and make a bit more of a plot line hopefully it all works out ...

thanks for your response an apple being from Australia I quite often forget how popular track is in our parts of the world, alot of what I put was just ...

thanks Lumi I can answer a few of your questions, one the organisation that wants to recruit him at the moment im not positive what I want to do with ...

sorry the first one I forgot to put review as yes

wow this story was deep, I was very moved by the story content and was left eager for the next chapter. I love the fact you've left out the backstory ...

thanks Iggy for pointing out some more errors I forgot to tell you in the last chapter that if you read the first chapter it states what KAC is. KAC ...

thanks Timmyjake im aware I make a lot of errors and I am thankful you pointed some of them out

thanks lucrezia ill email you the first two chapters through once I finish trying to edit them and have you see if you can pick any more up.

thanks iggy sorry haven't been on for a while I am aware that I make a lot of errors. Normally even after I read through the story three or four ...

Thanks lucrezia for the review im looking for help in the future if you could help that would be great, ive just finished the second chapter so that will be ...

Going to be honest here and admit my grammar I still very flawed and this is mainly due to disability which affects my ability to put what im thinking of ...

Thanks for the review

Thanks mate for the review appreciate it

Wow what a great start to story I love the direction you seem to be going with this story my only qualm is the lack of resistance from lia in ...