brassnbridle

First thing I want to say is I love your style of writing. Its very easy to read, flows well, and your charater definitely has a unique voice. I haven't ...

Interesting bit of writing. Thank you for already putting work into the spelling, grammar, and sentence structure; it's so much easier for me to concentrate on the story when I'm ...

Well I just wanted to let you know that I understood what took place with vincint fine, though I had one confused moment that passed quickly when your MC tried ...

Your story flows beautifully- you really nailed the fairy-tale feel. Though the post was kind of long, I enjoyed the entire thing and it was paced well. I thought I ...

First I want to say STOP DOUBTING YOURSELF! This is entertaining and easy to read- if I found this book in the library, I would keep reading. And even when ...

I liked this! it was well-written and the idea was interesting and caught my attention right away. The pace was nice and steady and I liked the tone. Her getting ...

First, before anything else, I would recommend shortening this post a bit to make it easier to review. Also, please, please, please make each new person speaking a new paragraph, ...

This does have a poetic feel, especially the beginning. More story and details would definately be welcome, it's interesting to read. A family is among outlaws is impossible except in ...

I really enjoyed this. I liked the tongue-in-cheek style, and your writing flowed really well. "Disgraceful!" they said, blissfully unconscious of the eggs tumbling out of their freely swinging basket

I agree that it's very well written, a great piece of descriptive writing. There's not much going on, so if this style kept up for much longer, I'm afraid you ...

This was good! I can tell you put alot of time and thought into this. I like how you've kept the character dynamics and everything, and the idea of Harry, ...

First of all, I want to agree that this was well-written and well-polished, and probably has a great deal of potential. I don't want to depress you in that respect. ...

I agree with the rushed and slightly emotionless feel, but it was definately well-done even with that. He didn't even have to look to know what it was... Blood. . ...

I agree with it being realistic enough for a reader to grasp. Besides, sometimes teens unfortunately commit suicide for much much stupider reasons that don't really make any sense to ...

Nice- it definitely has a good hook. I can tell you've put a lot of work into this. I'm interested to find out what's so dire about the Day of ...