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Hi!! Thank you so much for writing a review! Thanks for pointing out some awkward phrasing, and yeah I had no idea "statuesque" just meant really tall LOL. I appreciate ...

Hi! Thank you so much for taking the time to write a review! I loved hearing how you interpreted different aspects of the story. Thank you for all the feedback, ...

Thank you so much for your time and kind words!!

Thank you so much for review! I'm glad the character's struggle came across as realistic and relatable. I love the idea of changing the "You need like five potions just ...

Thank you so much for your review! I'm so glad you connected to the main character! Also, thank you for helping me out with that starting sentence. I kept reworking ...

Thank you so much for your time and insight! Your review was very helpful, and I'm glad you found the dialogue natural because I've always been quite hesitant to write ...

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Thank you so much for your time and kind words!!

Thank you so much for your time and insight! I'll definitely take all your comments into consideration when revisiting my story! Recently, I've been having a random itch to write ...

Thank you so much for your review! I agree, I felt myself struggling a bit with the tenses, so thank you for pointing out the specific areas that don't match ...

This one really hit me in the gut! I really loved the last line. I like that it both establishes reaching adulthood but also hints towards some sort of inner ...