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Shella's back to review your work. Sorry I waited so long to get around to this. The room was awfully filled with a deafening snore that echoed like a siren ...

Hi, I'm Shella, here to review your writing, obviously. Well first things first. it is clear that the young man hates the smoke, "it" needs to be capitalized. as he ...

Wow. Usually, I don't care too much for poetry but I happened to stumble accross this and I loved it. Most poems that I've read haven't been powerful enough to ...

I think I found another spelling error that no one pointed out. Tear streamed freely down his cheeks, occasionally falling in her hair. I think that should be tears. Other ...

Grammar mistakes , I couldn't find many. Their true, at least some of the time anyways. Their should be they're. My parent's probably could of left me I think it ...

Well, that was pretty sad But I thought it was pretty well written. Everything was so descriptive. It made me want to be there with the characters. You must have ...

My favorite vampire series is Vampire Diaries by L. J. Smith. It was simply amazing. It has romance, suspense, and humor. Another series by the same author is the Night ...

OK first of all, there's not enough detail for my taste. I didn't have any image in my head while reading and, for me, that's a very bad sign. Second ...

Hiya, friend. Well, I really liked the prologue. I''m itching to know more about that of course. The first chapter sort of reminds me of Old Magic. The entire time ...