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  • Other » Health, Other Re: Not a story but a cry for advice!

    I'm so overwhelmed by the incredible responses I've had to this. Thank you for taking the time to reply! It means a lot and you are honestly helping me so ...

    May 21, 2016
  • Other » Health, Other Re: Not a story but a cry for advice!

    Thank you! I can't even explain how much your response means to me. You made me smile, and I appreciate that. (Today I made myself have a cheat day - ...

    May 21, 2016
  • Other » Health, Other Re: Not a story but a cry for advice!

    Thank you for relying! I'll take your advice on board & hopefully it helps. Doesn't it suck that we both have to deal with this? Society isn't great.

    May 20, 2016
  • Other » Health, Other Re: Not a story but a cry for advice!

    Wow, thank you so much. I'm almost welling up here. You're right, it's not always about the way you look, but in this day and age, it's at least 80/20, ...

    May 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Titanic Love Story

    Thanks for the feedback! I know, I thought the exact same thing about the flights and historic side of things. But this story was written just for me to read ...

    May 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Titanic Love Story (Part 2)

    Thank-you for all your feedback! I know this story isn't original, but that's what I felt like writing at the time. I just really wanted to write a basic Titanic ...

    May 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Never Good Enough

    I really like where you're going with this, it's a really good start! I can't wait to see what else there is to come. (:

    Apr 7, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Someone Like You

    PM to remind me to review this! It's late, on a school night, so I can't now. But I want to, you've got something good going here. :D

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Oscar was a ripped umbrella

    This needs to be placed into smaller paragraphs. Also, new line for a new speaker.

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Deleted

    This is short but ohso very powerful! I really love this. Great, great work. (:

    Jul 28, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Eating for Two

    Great story! I love the ending. It's cute. (:

    Jul 18, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Just The Life Of A Writer (Revised)

    This is absolutely amazing! That's all I have to say. (:

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Perfect Day

    AHHH! This is just so adorable. I love it, a lot. The ending is just a great way to finish it off. Simple, but totally amazing. Well done. (:

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Revenge

    I have no nitpicks what-so-ever! I loved this. A lot. Your style of writing is one that draws in your readers, and it definitely made me laugh. How did you ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Kiss me in the rain, baby.

    I agree with both comments above!!!!!! One question, why'd she go to the hospital?

    Jun 13, 2011


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