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I found this a very good piece of work. Short but good. Are you going to carry this on? I reckon you should i was just getting into it! This ...

WOW! That was really good. Is this the end of the story? Were Rachel And Audrey best friends? Or sisters? I really liked this! I liked how you showed what ...

Hi there! Sorry i'm not very good at reviews, so i'll just tell you what i thought about your story. WOW! I really felt bad for Issiah. I had to ...

I liked this! I could never write anything like that. (I'm no good at poems!) But that was really good! I enjoyed it. Just listen to the advice people have ...

hahahhahahah :D Even though i am a fan of Twilight i found this very well written and creative. I liked the way he just gives up on trying to convince ...

Hello me again, told you i would review this part. Anyway, very good! but i felt that it was kind of all a bit sudden with Summer and Demetri, but ...

Heya I'm not very good at this reviewing, but i think other people have done a good job. I think this is a very good story very captivating I really ...

Hiya, borntoshop here. I'm not very good at reviews, but I'll tell you what i liked and didn't. I thought you were very descriptive and you explained how she felt ...

This story is so sad.! I can't see anything that hasn't already been said. The concept of the story is so true bullies can be so mean, and then the ...

Very good It seemed to grip me the whole way through . It was very descriptive and really made a picture in my head. Like what someone said above you ...

I felt that there was to much talking and not enough, paragraphs that could build a very good picture in your head. Don't get me wrong it still got a ...

I love it but i do like all your stories, you make them so real and put a lot of emotion and use good words. I thought it was very ...

Omgosh!!!! I love it please please hurry with the nest chapter i NEED to know what happens please PM me. Thanxz Borntoshop. Love it sooooooo much please get the next ...

Hiya im not very good at reviews! I love your story so much. But it seemed like avery short chapter. Is it part of it? Once again please PM me. ...

This is good and it has abit of humour in it! It shows what kind of girl maria is and i just thought that this was very good. And i ...