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This was really, really good. I kept expecting something bad to happen, like she jumped off the cliff and something happened. I don't know, i'm a very depressive writer and ...

This was pretty good :) Can't believe he killed himself! A couple of things though. A few times you said, Moth, instead of Month. And once, Curios instead of Curious. ...

I really 'liked' this, it made me laugh. I love the ending. Altogether great piece. I'm not very good at reviewing, and everyone else has done pretty much everything. :) ...

Okay first off, right now i am so SO annoyed at 'seeminglymeaningless'. I could really, truly say some completely horrible things, but i'm not going to because i'm not like ...

I agree with the others. This is depressing, all dark and gloomy. *shivers* I'm more of i smiley person :D Is all I can use to describe what’s around me. ...

Wow. Just...wow. This impacted me more than the other three. The first sentence made my stomach drop and my heart clench. I know this might sound pythetic the first part ...

Very, very good. Still :) Yeah, i am going through and reading them all haha. One thing i would say to change, maybe is.. But you don't, because you can't. ...

Hey, Born here! :) I liked this piece of work. It was cute. One thing i would say to change is the way you right three letters right next to ...

Oh. My. Gosh. This piece almost had me in tears! I could feel my heart tightening! Is this true? If so i'm extremely sorry about your loss. One thing that ...

Hey, Born here! So you can paint the blank canvas of your existence with color. LOVE it :) That is a really awesome way of putting it. Totally awesome :) ...

You know what sorry guys! But brontobeawriter , I didn't threaten not to write anymore,and you made me sound a whole lot worse! I deleted that comment,Just to suite you! ...

This was really good :) One question, how could they save the baby? Because your MC is just telling her boyfriend/husband now that she is pregnant. How could he not ...

I really liked this ! :) You have a real way with words, and i was captured right from the very first sentence. One question, was that man a figment ...

Awwwwwwwwwah !! That's super sad D: How did Sterling die though? That's one thing you might want to mention. And also, go through and check your grammer and punctuation. I ...

I'm not good at reviewing so i'll just leave that to everyone else. Just thought i'd say i really really liked this story!!! :) Born pushes 'like' ! :D