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Aw man, Jasmine this was hilarious! You deserve to be featured. Tanya

Paul - this was hilarious, whether you meant it to be or not. I have braces, thank you for confirming that 'myth'. Glad my boyfriend doesn't have any. You seem ...

hahah! I bursted out laughing when you said the 'fool' lyric and my sister's picture appeared. Oh, Lord. Can't wait to see her face. This was great, Jashy. You're awesome

Gheala, I'm back! Okay, I thought this was better done. I liked the descriptions, but I want to caution you: don't go overboard. I liked Selim better here: he seemed ...

Guys don't have emotions, right? Nooooo. They do. Trust me. My brother always cries when his girlfriends break up with him. It's funny. Skins? *sighs* You're insane, my friend. In ...

Ah. Well...I found her thoughts to be slightly childish. But maybe it was just me. Great story. Can't wait to read the second part :D

Much, much better! It wasn't over the top: it was nicely detailed and quite realistic. Tanya :D

Day! I found this better - but still not 'perfect' if that makes any sense. You say that the wind rushed back her broken body - I really want to ...

Cassi, thank you. Although, I'm slightly confuse. If it doesn't show, what mistakes have I made? Tanya :D

Wow, Bailey. I thought this was beautiful and earnest and heartfelt. I'm sorry I can't offer a proper review, but poetry just isn't my thing. I definitely like this, though. ...

Suz, Emma, Shubhi! Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews, guys! And for making my work featured. I'M way up there in the stars *awed* Shubhi, you're right; I'm ...

hahah. Thank you, guys!

Haha, thanks Snickers. Glad you enjoyed the laugh :D

hahaha thank you Story!

Thank you my daughter!