borntobeawriter

Hey etherealember, Here as requested (and it's my pleasure, believe me :)) Now, first I must mention that I've never reviewed a play script before. In grammar, this I noticed: ...

Hey there Skins, I have no nitpicks about the grammar and I have to congratulate you; the flow and the writing just keeps getting better at every chapter. What I ...

Really? I'm the first one here? *gapes* Well, alrighty then! Although an easy task for most girls, I for one had never had the urge to wear any. I didn’t ...

Hey there Skins, It's me, Tanya, back for a 5th review! Okay, first of all, I thought the flow of this chapter was great. It wasn't erratic or difficult to ...

Hey there! I came to check it out and it is a beautiful piece. I say nothing more because I know nothing of poetry. I found it simply beautiful and ...

Hey Dragnet, I'm here as requested. Sorry it took me longer than usual, I've been having problems with my laptop :D Compelled, I reached out to touch the truck of ...

Ok, last review for the day and I'm off to bed! For starters, I loved the chapter but I agree with Mr. Knightly: it isn't necessary to spend a whole ...

LOL well, I got it right away -comment about the dead people in the cemetary- and I thought it was quite clever. Then again, I've just spent the last 2 ...

Hey Skins! I want to apologize right now if I start making no sense at all! I'm way past my bed time lol. Ok, well, there's one thing that struck ...

Hey Skins, me again for yet another review. Hope you're not fed up yet :D I have to say right from the start that I'm amazed at the leap of ...

Hey Skins! Ok, overall, I must agree with I think it was Dreamy; this was an info dump. I'm not sure how to correct it but there's one thing I'd ...

Hey Skins. Just did the first chapter review, back here for the edit lol I liked the way you restarted the first part, sounded great. I have to wonder though: ...

Okkkkkkkkkkay now. Hi Skins! Just read your first chapter and all the comments and there's one thing I just don't get. You begin by saying that he just met his ...

Hey there Dragnet, Tanya here for a review! But the desire inside of me was unsatisfied, no matter what I did. It was unlike any other need that I had ...

Hey Storyweaver, I'm Tanya and I loved this prologue. It was intriguing but I have to agree with Mochi. There is no hook at the beginning, no description and the ...