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Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (1)
Well, wow Emma Jane. Seriously. Do NOT stop writing this piece, I'll go review everything you have. You can also go in other forums named 'will review for food'. I ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Sorry for the delay! Hey Ember!! Okay, well, that was definitely unexpected but it was a great end to a great play. Now, for an overall review. I'm not familiar ...
May 25, 2010 -
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Wow! Didn't see that coming...Until he asked for the joint account. I mean, if they were going to get married, shouldn't they already have a joint account? Or have already ...
May 18, 2010 -
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LOL sorry Ember for the delay, been a busy few days. I'm actually after Isha here *gasp*. Ok, I loved this scene. I'm glad Andrea won't forgive the doctor because ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 11
lol, now it's my turn to be here first! Okay, well, I love this part but I can't wait to get into more action (sound familiar? lol). I mean, I ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Re: The Old Woman and the Werewolf (2 of 2)
Hey Conrad, You'd think I'd have nothing to say after all those wonderful reviews, but I do :D I thought you should leave out the part of her cancer altogether. ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Vampire House
Hey there Conrad, Tanya here for a review! Okay, I liked this; it was really interesting. Kept me on the edge of my seat. What I didn't like was the ...
May 15, 2010 -
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Um, is 'hussy' a bad word? Not where I come from. Hum... Anyway, Ember, another great chapter! Er, scene. I enjoyed it and I have no nitpicks about it. Vivica ...
May 15, 2010 -
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Haha, funny because I was going to send you a pm this morning, asking where are the other scenes had went. Ok, Ember, great chapter. It flowed well and I ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Six ~ Part Two)
Unless I'm mistaken, Shubbi, that wasn't Annabel he was referring to. Why would she be surprised that he can see her; Annabel already knows he can... Skins, great chapter once ...
May 10, 2010 -
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Hey Ember, ooooh! Intriguing! Plot twists definitely ahead! But...I agree with everything bond girl wrote before me. You have a tendency to skip scenes and years and it would be ...
May 4, 2010 -
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Hey Ember! Beautifully written, you really have a nice style. That being said, I think a transition chapter er... scene is in order. We don't know Andrea, and I would ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Beneath the Lies - Chapter 2
Hey Brokenwing, Tanya here for another review. Ok, as much as I loved the previous chapter, this one was confusing to me. The actions happened so fast, the mc when ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Beneath the Lies - Chapter 1
Haha, I love this! Hi Brokenwing, I'm Tanya, here for a review. On to the nitpicks! The echo of harsh breathing could be heard down the hall, but that is ...
May 2, 2010 -
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Hey etherealember, Here as requested (and it's my pleasure, believe me :)) Now, first I must mention that I've never reviewed a play script before. In grammar, this I noticed: ...
May 2, 2010
