borntobeawriter

Yay! Tooth, back down now! haha Vara scowled, doubt rising in her at the master’s image of Kieran. Sure, he’d been weaker than wet paper, but would he have…? Yes, ...

Pink! Yay! What a beautiful surprise to wake up to! Ok, Now. FOr my opinion. Haha. (dragging this out, much?) I completely disagree with Shubs. (Sorry Shubs!). I felt this ...

Hey Tallulah! Thank you so much for sending me this PM. I'd really enjoyed the first chapter and it's my pleasure to review this one, too! For tragic moment, that’s ...

hey....blueshubs! Welcome to YWS!! ;) haha. Tanya here, for a review of course. If I could have gone into my heart that night, I would have introduced you to the ...

Hey Lauren! I'm Tanya, welcome to YWS! I just spent the past 45 minutes on this piece, and my mouse dropped to the floor and clicked on the button, closing ...

Wow, Hi. I'm Tanya. Welcome to YWS! I was going to do a review but I just saw the format of your chapter. First of all, it is a very ...

This is very fantastic indeed! Thank you for posting! I started reading and I was like "What? Doesn't she woop his butt in the previous version?" Then, I kept reading. ...

Holy mother of Harry Potter, you weren't kidding when you said it was long! haha Well, I'm up for a challenge! :D I liked Caitlin, but I wasn’t going to ...

Hey there Shubhi, Tanya here, a little late, but here :D Well this is a definite improvement of your first part. You managed to show off Jane's personality, without telling ...

Haha, I'm Second (the S deserves a capital, don't we agree ;) ) Pink already found the mistakes I was going to nitpick. As to where the story is going....I'm ...

Skins! Last one! I hope I don't make too many typos, my fingers are dead! This was a great chapter. It was sweet and quiet following the action-packed previous ones. ...

Hmmm.. I have a pretty good idea where this is going. Well, sorta. Other people are starting to get it too.. If I'm right, he technically, sorta, in a way, ...

Haha, you are getting more and more 'likes', have you realised that? I have -once again- nothing to add. My arms and fingers are praying for release but I refuse ...

Skins! Great chapter! I agree with Rach about having two disctintive impressions of this. Tori's point of view, and what the reality was. Nicely done. The chapter itself was great, ...

A pair of bloodshot, tired eyes looked up at me through the small mirror at the front of the bus. The man who owned those eyes grunted something inaudible. Sniffing, ...