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I really only had trouble with the second stanza, other then that, I liked this poem. -bobiscool

nice haiku...I have to write one for my class...but they are hard to write. -bobiscool

wow...thats a lot of S's...how the heck do you right alterations? I can't figure it out. -bobiscool134

I like this poem. Since I live in Hawaii, I don't get much of the "Winter" feeling, but could feeling winter while reading this poem. -bobiscool134

That was a very moving poem...thats all I can say, I am speechless -bobiscool

I liked this poem, it's one of those almost everyone can relate to types of poems. -bobiscool134

did you mean the fifth stanza? that is the only stanza with more then six lines, I didn't even realize it had seven lines. I'll fix that. thanks -bobiscool

I liked play, but thought the poem was good as well. It would be interesting if you could find a way to incorporate this poem into the play somehow.

I liked this story. I liked the fact that their situations were not explained, but through the story you could see each character, and figure out what they are going ...