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Re: The Sea of Night
I really don't know what to say apart from... no, I don't know what to say. I know it's not helpful but I can't think of much to sy about ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: Cold
oh, i never thought of how you are with your parents and how you are with your friends in that way... were you dragged into drinking/smoking/stuff/ well, not really dragged, ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: You know and you know
huh? is this part of a play, because none of the story is explained or maybe i'm just confused *looks confused* yep, that might be it keep up the good ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: first person
wow, your work makes my stuff look normal (though i'm not sure whether thats good or bad) maybe you sould write somthing shorter, that makes it easier to read. well, ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: Machines
okay, that was kinda wierd, but i think i like it. i wonder if that's how repressed psychs really think? I wonder if i know any people like that *looks ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: My First Poem
I haven't read/ written an acrostic poem since primary school, but i liked this one. especialy the bit about the earth being a pendulem (is that how you spell it?) ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: Look at the Harlots! /P
ohhhhhkayyyyy... that was kinda wierd, I'm glad I'm not called vera or I would be REALLY freaked. *looks over her sholder just in case* okay, no ones there, but I'm ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: Erased
I really like this actually, though i don't really know what's going on. can't really fault it. I don't think it sounded like a 7 year olds poem, repition (is ...
Mar 10, 2005
