bluecoral

Thank you for your review.

I think you misread the word snort for snore? So there's no change in the scene. ^^ About mentioning what Kei thinks.. That might be done for other scene/chapter if ...

Now that I read the story back, yes, you are right. The description on Daniel's part is almost none, as the whole piece is themed to Kei. I thought the ...

Thank you for your review. Glad you like it. %uD83D%uDE0A

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Dang, why it need to be a dream? Anyway, hello. I'm bluecoral. First impression- I like this story. This is my first time reviewing a script, and the different presentation ...

Wait! What is happening here? I can't wait for the next chapter. Nice story. :)

This story is nice. I like reading it. It amazing on how you write it for only 20 minutes. Good job. :)

thank you for the review!

thank for the review!

thank for the review!