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Re: Alone (Part 1)
That description about stethoscope is peculiar. Since stethoscope isn't a living thing, labelling it as snake make it seem alive, while the real thing is static. The doctor stutters. Now, ...
Jul 15, 2017 -
Re: You never told me
Hello. I can feel the regret through her description. This is a sad story, and you convey it well. I like how simple and short this is, but there's a ...
Jun 27, 2017 -
Re: The Last Calculator
Dang, why it need to be a dream? Anyway, hello. I'm bluecoral. First impression- I like this story. This is my first time reviewing a script, and the different presentation ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: The Grim Sleeper (Prologue)
Hello, there. I'm Bluecoral. Now, before I start, I want to apologize if the quality of my review will not satisfy you. It had been a long time since I ...
Jun 23, 2017
