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  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Alone (Part 1)

    That description about stethoscope is peculiar. Since stethoscope isn't a living thing, labelling it as snake make it seem alive, while the real thing is static. The doctor stutters. Now, ...

    Jul 15, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Realistic Re: You never told me

    Hello. I can feel the regret through her description. This is a sad story, and you convey it well. I like how simple and short this is, but there's a ...

    Jun 27, 2017
  • Script » Humor, General Re: The Last Calculator

    Dang, why it need to be a dream? Anyway, hello. I'm bluecoral. First impression- I like this story. This is my first time reviewing a script, and the different presentation ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Grim Sleeper (Prologue)

    Hello, there. I'm Bluecoral. Now, before I start, I want to apologize if the quality of my review will not satisfy you. It had been a long time since I ...

    Jun 23, 2017


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