bluebird24

While I think you have a strong point in mind for this poem, I get a bit confused about how it goes from being about her affect on you, to ...

To begin, I just want to say I really enjoyed this. I mean honestly how can you not like a piece that ends in "a giraffe on a dining table?". ...

Wow, I really like this poem. I think that you really illistrate how children think and feel and how they are a true example of innocence. My favorite line is ...

I like your song and although like most songs bits and pieces need to be reworded to flow better I think that overall your poem has a interesting story line ...

Ok so this is my first time reviewing so I will try my best. I think your poem is funny and quirky. I love the fact that even with a ...