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I personally LOVE this!! Because you kept me reading,all the way through xD and this is the first poem that's had that effect on me. I can see this maiden ...

OMG really? dude I want to write like this!!

this is such a cute poem :) it's almost like i can feel the depth behind it ,that's good poetry

Your style of writing is attractive :) The searing agony,the warmth of the flames, the feeling of being trapped, it's easy to imagine. Thank you for submitting this piece. However, ...