bloodyblackrose

wow. this was really intense. very emotional, and can appeal to all types of people. theres soooo much in this. there was a few spelling errors and the sentences didn't ...

i thought it was really good. you've got the whole 'streams of consciousness' deal going on. it doesn't have to make sense. well.... maybe a little lol. but it was ...

heyyy, so. u r sitting right next to me, but i need the points hahahah. sooo heres wht i think. i think: really good. its my type of writing. i ...

i like your vocabulary. this poem was really thought-provoking. i got really intrigued, especially by the fact that the "angel" seemed to be cold and cruel, yet beautiful at the ...

i thought this poem was very well-written. you should keep writing like this, because i think it expresses your emotions really well. even if you weren't truly feeling that way, ...

i really liked your rhyme scheme. and i liked how you started each stanza with 'dreaming of', it was like you were making a list of things that you were ...

i really liked this. it was kind of confusing, but then again, i didnt really take the time to think about it. haha. i just liked the words and the ...

wow. i really really love this poem. i have nothing bad to say about it. everything was like, perfect. i love your vocabulary, and the way you put things. i ...

i love this poem. it expresses the feeling that most people are afraid to talk about. the feeling that love is non-existant..... or that you're afraid to feel love because ...

personally i really liked the poem, because i understand the emotion in it. yes, i agree with the other comments, the rhyme scheme is a little off, but that is ...