bloodybelle01

Yeah, I am planning on using more latin... would you suggest, though, that the first time a word comes up, I include the definitions in the actual chapter?

Yes, I am reviewing my own work (sort of). I would just like to mention that I am marking this as a review to get this out of the green ...

Yes, I am reviewing my own work (sort of). I would just like to mention that I am marking this as a review to get this out of the green ...

Ah, I see (I wouldn't of known as I haven't read the previous parts). Ah, so the mouse was neutral :) Sorry about the blond/blonde (I tend to have an ...

Thank you for your welcome and your tips! I have written them down and will use them when I get around to editing this, which should be soon hopefully... By ...

Actually, never mind, I will leave it like this as another review I got taught me somethings to fix about this but also general truths when it comes to writing.

Thanks again for another wonderful review!

Do you know how to do that? If you do, could you message me the details because I had the same feelings :)

No problem, happy to help!

Thank you so much! You were a) spot on with what you got from this chapter and this was probably one of the most encouraging and positive comments I have ...

Thank you!

Yeah, this is sort of a skeleton... I plan on taking it down this weekend for major editing and then putting it back up! Thank you for the recommendation!

Okay!

Sorry I must have missed that and okay!

Yes I do... very much!