bloodybelle01

Hello, You've got very nice poem going here... these are a few pointers :) Critiques: 1. You don't need stars between verses, just a larger space. 2. The second line ...

This is really interesting and I am enjoying it a lot! I hope that you keep on writing it. Your characters seem to have a good basis and I can't ...

I am not sure if I am seeing the whole thing or not... I only see: What's in a name? - DivineFool But I'll review the question, as that was ...

Oh... a reincarnation? Reminds me a bit of Fallen by Lauren Kate. Have you read that series? I loved this, the amount of tension was just right. Your formatting is ...

Wow, this is great, I can't wait to read more! This is a beautiful read and very interesting, I can't wait to read more. I'm already coming to conclusions and ...

I like the emotion that you portray and the way that you leave the reader with many options as to how they chose to interpret your piece of work. I ...

Yes, you definitely have some spacing issues... were the split up words a result of that? I like your similes especially the one about the grim reaper. These combined with ...

This, despite having a nice sentiment and some interesting language, felt a little stilted. Also, the use of .. throughout your piece was disturbing and not proper grammar. I would ...

You have great rhythm! One thing I would say, is in the 5th line to the bottom (with every blessed verse) to make the rhythm flow nicely, only if you ...