blonde&confused

Excellent poem with a very clear message and quite funny too. (at least i thought it was funny as you were obviously being ironic when you were calling your poetry ...

Hi just read your poem and thought i'd attempt a review. I liked your general idea and there were some really good lines such as the first two. Your rhythym ...

I liked the general idea of your poem, but i think it needs a little work to make it perfect. One thing that could help is including some more punctuation ...

I thought it was well-written, but not really in the exact same style as J.K. Rowling. And if you're going to improve it (which i hope you will, as i ...

I thought that the odd rhyme and half-rhyme you had included worked very well. I do think though that the others are right about including more punctuation as that means ...

I liked the general idea of your poem and the first 2 lines were really good, it was just that your grammatical accuracy let you down. I'd suggest that you ...

I think that it was good, but could be improved. For instance you could go into more detail about the red nights and why they're red or why they effect ...

I really enjoyed reading this, it had a really nice plot and i especially liked the irony of the ending. Only real flaws i could find were a couple of ...

i would class it as a short story. does the competition have any restrictions on how many words you can use etc? cause if your stories fits the regulations, i ...

I liked it. I thought it had nice flow, although i agree with Claudette that it sounded much more like a song than a poem. Which is okay, except that ...

personally, i love free verse poems as i find they can often b a lot more truthful than others. plus wen you're upset or something, free verse is a very ...

i really liked the poem. i think too many ppl get tied down by trying 2 follow patterns and trends and stuff rather than just writing from the heart, which ...