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i didnt get any of that story, matbe its ny lack of logic or somin but it had absaloutly no start , beginning or end, it had no scene setting ...

this is such a realistic remake (exept the wierd egg)of what happens whan i try to write somthing decent, i write thinking im the greatest story-teller in the world , ...

this was.......like the........blue buttock of voldermort, the god of love. ps: this was great , it had an atmosphere that is rare and realistic, i could almost feel the weather ...

A abseloutly fantastic mix between the story of shakes pears and the style of tolkien, i dont no why its in fantasy fiction ( maybe it will be revealed later ...

It was realy hard to understand , your style was good but you mixed errelavent stuff like the formulas with horrer scenes. Make it simpler and use more dialog, cs ...

I dont get it, one minute a brave girl trana save her sister next minute shes demanding to hang her dead sister in the village......... . Other than this , ...

This was a Great story, didnt need to have a climax of swords or guns to be good .like the ending. And about the exams , if you have nothing ...

This was brilliantly done, so much that even though it was only about somthing unfictiony it held my attention and i read it all, it must of took alot of ...

It started off quite bland and confusing( this is probably cs you didnt describe his situation or destanation that clearly)but the more i read , the better it got , ...

I...This is the best thing i've ever read. How the hell dyou do this, your like the new Tolkien, and im not just saying that...really. My writing compared to this ...

A normal kid would of said ' ok....' but not me , for i am not normal. This story was great and is a change from the seriousness of alot ...

whoa!,thats along poem. It was wierd but good. IT had good descriptons of what your feeling and in a wierd canna way it reflected that image of a nut( im ...

this was great! really made my day. your discriptions acctually made this picture in my mind of a lonly girl wandering the pavements with nothing other than street lamps for ...

This was som fine stuff, the best of it was the talking , it felt real, and this has shown me somthing. You have wrote about somthing so small and ...