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Very nice. I liked it! Just like the others said, the ending didn't pack a punch. However, great job and keep writing. :wink:

Really good. I wrote a poem about summer also. It's a sonnet. Anyway enough about me, I liked it. I love summer!!!!!! Great job and keep it up! :D

I'm sorry I thought this was corny and bad. I think with a little work, it can be better. Best wishes! :D

It was cute. I liked the first one better than the second one though.

Nicely done. I enjoyed reading it. :D

ooooooooooooooooohh deep. I like. But space it out a little more I guess. Anyway, nice poem keep it up! See you around school!

Wow azila... you took the words out my mouth. Wow.

It was good. Ugh.... I agree with Colleen also. Best wishes!

I liked the poem. Nice imagery. Keep it up girl!

Thank you Tag and welcome to YWS! :D

Thanks a mil Shadow!! :D

Hello Tag!! I'm Brooke and welcome to young writers society! Anyway, I adored this poem. It had a lot of feeling in it. Great Job and keep it up.

Nice job. I have a cat and I was thinking about her the whole time. I would break down and cry if somebody killed my kitty! Anyway, I liked it ...

I liked this shadow. I can really relate to it. Nicely done!! I can't wait to hear more of poems like this. Anyway, see you at lunch and good luck! ...

Hey that's the name of my school!!!!!! Any who, I'm with shadow. It's the kind of story that you have to read over again to get it. Clever. See you ...