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Re: Kite tails
It's pretty good. I'm with everyone else, it needs some work. But all in all, it was okay. Best of luck! :D
Tue Apr 15, 2008 10:44 pm -
Re: Of Fire
Nice. I liked it very much. Great job though!
Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:04 pm -
Re: Simply As That
Thanks..... I guess. :) :?
Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:01 pm -
Re: Simply As That
Thanks for the review! :D
Tue Apr 15, 2008 4:05 pm -
Re: Meorin's soliloquy
Very nice. Very nice indeed.... Anywho...lsilvernail is right on the errors,but, all in all the piece was good, Keep up the good work! :)
Mon Apr 14, 2008 5:07 pm -
Re: Simply As That
Thanks darkdove! Like the new avatar. :wink:
Mon Apr 14, 2008 5:03 pm -
Re: Simply As That
Thank you ma'am. :D I will fight them to the death! :smt068 :smt072
Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:43 pm -
Re: The Moon Was Almost Full
oooooh....nice. I enjoyed reading this piece thank you. Keep writing.
Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:38 pm -
Re: Skittles
Agreed. This should be moved. I like skittles. :D
Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:11 pm -
Re: Satan's pain
I liked this. Sad though...but well thought out. Keep up the good work!
Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:08 pm -
Re: His Fool
Thank you all for the comments. Can you believe that I make this up in my math class in 20 minutes? Anyway glad you'll liked it. :D
Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:03 pm -
Re: Song in My Head
Cute poem. I liked it. I enjoy reading short and sweet poems. Keep up the good work! :D
Sun Apr 06, 2008 9:36 pm -
Re: Family
I love my family and I like this poem, even though it was a little corny to me. Welcome to YWS and I hope to read some of your other ...
Fri Apr 04, 2008 5:09 pm -
Re: It Is Far Better
I loved this (tear) :smt010 Full of emotion. Great just great.
Fri Apr 04, 2008 4:59 pm -
Re: Cynical World
Nicely done. Keep writing! :D :wink:
Fri Apr 04, 2008 4:55 pm