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I really liked this poem. I read it three times and still ain't tired of it! Great job! See you 4th period!!!

I liked it, but it was sooooo corny. I heard a million of these kind of poems in my lifetime. If you really had gave it some thought, it would ...

This was pretty good. I enjoyed it very much. You're good with storytelling. Keep up the good work. :)

I liked the poem. Coolness!!!

I read this times and I didn't get it. I even asked my friend to read it and she didn't understand it. Welcome to YWS and good luck!!!

i liked it! I hope my work will be as amazing as yours.I love how you put words together, you're beyond talented. Good luck!!!!

I really enjoyed reading this. For such a small passage, it as a big impact. i don't know what that means, but great description! Keep writing.

This was excellent. I wrote a poem about a bird also, but i like yours better. Maybe you should read mines and see what you think. It's called The Cage.

Not to be rude, but even though in was informative, it was boring to read. It was long and the lines were too close together. Keep writing though.

I liked this poem. I liked how you wrote to lines then wrote a question at the end. Keep writing unrhymed poems and rhymed.

Thanks, I appreciate the marvelous comments. :D

Thanks scotty. I spaced the lines because people told me to double space. Anyway, I will correct the errors.

I didn't like this, but I think if you would have put more thought to it, it would have been good. You should move this to other poetry. Adios!!!!!

Thank you lakegirls! I will try to write a sequel. I thought they moved it to the other fiction section.

Thanks darkdove! See you at lunch!!!!