blackblade

This poem is really cool! I like how you mention the title only in the second to last line but incorporate the idea of “always” subtly throughout the poem—“you rest ...

Hi CJ, Blackblade here for review! This poem is full of very intense and well-communicates emotion. The repetition of “oh” amplified the speakers’ lament by conveying an irreversible sense of ...

Hi, blackblade here for a review. I think this is an interesting start—it sets up the background for the story pretty well, and your ideas with the Sirens and Anti-Sirens ...

Hi, Aella here to review your poem! Your use of isocolon (parallel syntax structure) throughout this piece was very creative and effective. I like how you take us through time ...

Hey, I'm Aella, and I'm here to review your poem. This piece brings a very interesting metaphor - a bumble bee - to symbolize the speaker's love. You bring this ...