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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Life Goes On.

    Loved it! You're a brilliant writer! Keep it up!

    Tue Aug 20, 2013 1:36 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: When I Learned To Believe

    Hello! I agree with "rishabh", i really enjoyed the content but the structure was a little confusing. I think that you have a lot of talent but a little more ...

    Tue Aug 20, 2013 1:33 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dreams

    Hello :) Firstly, thank you for taking the time to write such a long and detailed review - much appreciated. By my desires being swept aside, I meant that often ...

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:28 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dreams

    Hello StoryWeaver :) Thank you for the advice, I will try to make it easier to read and more flowing when I edit :) Thanks for the welcome, and happy ...

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:22 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dreams

    Hello Shino :) Firstly, wow... thank you so much for spending so much time to write out such an extensive review haha, I really do appreciate it! All of your ...

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:20 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dreams

    Thank you, your advice is much appreciated!

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:16 am
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Culture Re: Life vs. Religion

    Hello Euph :) Firstly, thank you for taking the time to review my piece, it is much appreciated! Thank you for all of your advice, it was extremely useful and ...

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:15 am
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Culture Re: Life vs. Religion

    Hello, thank you for reviewing! I do actually have a works cited page, that I can/will use if this is ever published. Also, I completely agree that I should be ...

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:13 am
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Culture Re: Life vs. Religion

    Thank you! I appreciate your advice and interest in the topic. I actually live in the Philippines, and this has been a pretty big issue in the news that past ...

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:05 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dreams

    Hello :) Thank you for taking the time to review my work, and thanks for all the compliments - I appreciate it!

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:03 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dreams

    Thanks, glad you liked it :)

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:02 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dreams

    Thank you so much!! I appreciate it! :)

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:02 am
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Culture Re: Life vs. Religion

    Hi, first off thank you for taking the time to write out such a concise review haha, it's very much appreciated. Yes, I agree that the structure is somewhat lacking, ...

    Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:02 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dreams

    Thanks for the welcome and thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it! :)

    Sat Dec 29, 2012 8:19 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dreams

    Thanks for the feedback, I do appreciate the criticism. I do have to admit that the mistake in my rhyme scheme was probably due to sloppy editing and initially writing ...

    Sat Dec 29, 2012 6:41 am


In a world too often governed by corruption and arrogance, it can be difficult to stay true to one's literary and philosophical principles.
— Lemony Snicket