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[[lame-o-tastic sythe]] like Beki said,silly poems are written by famous authors all the time,, [[you're gonna be that famous author]] haha, xD ilyy devonlynne

omfg, this is [s]awesome[/s] amazing! lol, oh.so.emo =] so freakin dark. man,you make me want to cut miiself now ______________________________________ does anyone have cutting utensils? xD

Wow,i.love.it. xD All of your descripitions explodes with "You're depressed". I really enjoyed you dark poem!You should write more of these kind of poems =] 9.5 out of 10

Thanks for the positive feeback. :)

There are a few grammer and spelling mistakes in the begginning, but the rest is fine. The last paragraph took me in and it was such as suspense. It had ...

I saw some spelling mistakes and that's it.I bet those mistakes were happens to everyone, besides that its a really good story.The ending got me confused a little. Maybe next ...

Thanks for the positive replies everyone. =] Next time I will remeber to cap my I's Thanks Again!

Its good,but it needs more description. Your poem also seems like a short story,I don't like the way it was wrote. Just fix these problems and it would be perfect. ...

oh.so.deep. iloveit its a really emotional poetry. i want to cry,its that depressing in a good way xD

omg, =] its so darkk. so emotional. [[just like me]] -------------------------- If you enjoyed Archstormangel's "Dreamed of Hell" check out my poetry.