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bernardo23

  • Short Story » Narrative, Literature Re: 1,429.4 Miles

    Thanks brother, thank you for everything you've done for me. I'm the man I am today because of you and other things. You are truly a magnificent person.

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Literature Re: 1,429.4 Miles

    once*

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Literature Re: 1,429.4 Miles

    Thank you for the tips and corrections, I'll make sure as to considering them in upcoming publications, as again, thanks!

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Literature Re: 1,429.4 Miles

    Thank you very much for the great amount of support shown, I truly appreciate it!

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Literature Re: 1,429.4 Miles

    Thank you for the advice, as well for the support!

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Nevergreen

    Nice very vivid imagery. Very nice grammatical skills. Extremely nice use of figurative language. Magnificent similes and metaphors. Beautiful post, inspiring. Splendid job, looking forward to many mo

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Your name is Eridan Ampora...

    Nice very vivid imagery. Very nice grammatical skills. Extremely nice use of figurative language. Magnificent similes and metaphors. Beautiful post, inspiring. Splendid job, looking forward to many mo

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: short-lived

    Nice very vivid imagery. Very nice grammatical skills. Extremely nice use of figurative language. Magnificent similes and metaphors. Beautiful post, inspiring. Splendid job, looking forward to many mo

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic Re: Too Close Of An Encounter With The Third Kind

    Nice very vivid imagery. Very nice grammatical skills. Extremely nice use of figurative language. Magnificent similes and metaphors. Beautiful post, inspiring. Splendid job, looking forward to many mo

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: to keep out the chill

    Nice very vivid imagery. Very nice grammatical skills. Extremely nice use of figurative language. Magnificent similes and metaphors. Beautiful post, inspiring. Splendid job, looking forward to many mo

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Fallen Princess [Part 2]

    nice very vivid imagery. very nice grammatical skills. extremely nice use of figurative language. magnificent similes and metaphors. Beautiful post, inspiring. Splendid job, looking forward to many mo

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Anna

    nice. very nice. extremely nice. magnificent. Beautiful. Splendid.

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Easy to Install Sadness

    nice job. very nice. I like. Good job

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Hundred Reasons

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: A Snapshot of Goodbyes

    Sep 13, 2015


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