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Re: My Life is Like Mint Chocolate Chip Ice Cream
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Oct 3, 2017
This poem is very good for a third grader to write. I don't see any spelling mistakes. The line breaks seem to be random and make to poem chunky. It's ... -
Re: Pure Love
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Sep 22, 2017
This has too much told not enough show. What do the cats look like? Who is the child? Describe the how she felt don't say how she felt. There is ... -
Re: Pure Love
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Sep 22, 2017
Sorry for the spam young writers society keep messing up. -
Re: Pure Love
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Sep 22, 2017
This has too much told not enough show. What do the cats look like? Who is the child? Describe the how she felt don't say how she felt. There is ... -
Re: Lord have mercy, Christ have mercy, Lord have mercy
sorry misread the title
May 15, 2017 -
Re: Dear Mr.Andersen
Thank you for the review.
May 15, 2017 -
Re: Dear Mr.Andersen
Yes it does thanks a lot
May 15, 2017 -
Re: Flesh wounds or the girl who wouldn't die
This is a very good poem. I can't say I know how you feel but thank you for telling us about it. A way to make it beater if you're ...
May 14, 2017 -
Re: Dear Mr.Andersen
sorry for the misunderstanding but this is a poem about me and I misspelled Mr.Andersen and put Ms.Andersen. thanks for the review
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Re: A question, a thought, an answer
This is a good but sad poem. Thanks for sharing this with us. It's good they way it is but to really get a good reaction out of the reader. ...
May 13, 2017