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Hey there Harrug :) Just stopped by to have a look at your piece! I hope you're enjoying YWS and taking the time to have a look around. Let me ...

Hi there my competiton...I mean Eli! I thought it was a very powerful moment that you chose to write about in this piece of flash fiction and I thought for ...

Hey Snow, Just stopped by to have a quick look at this. There isn't a whole lot to say because this seems like it's the beginning of a much longer ...

Hey Jalmoc! The title caught my attention and I stopped by to have a look! Let's jump straight in. First of the main character's name Felix or Fenix? Because you ...

Hi Lycando! Just stopped by for a quick look at something you'd written since I see you around so much :) Just a few mistakes I noticed/things that bothered me ...

Peaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Here I am finally! I'm sorry it took so long >.< So glad to see you back around, I always enjoyed your writing and just you. Anyway! On with ...

Hey there dupaix :) I hope you're enjoying the site and having a look around! I just stopped by to have a quick look at your story. I like the ...

Hi there Alice! Here as requested. Oooh! I didn't realise this was going to be a longer story! Now I am interested to see where this will go and what ...

Hey Alice! Just stopped by to have a look at your story. Hope you're off enjoying the site :) Firstly, I quite enjoyed this. It's completely not fair that you're ...

Hi there Annii :) So, lets have a look! Generally, this was quite confusing. I think by the end I just about managed to fit all the pieces together but ...

Hey there Songwriter :) Stopping by to have a look at your story here. Welcome to the site as well! I think the theme you have at the centre of ...

Hi There doodlegirl, Just stopped by to have a look at your story here. Obviously the first thing I notice is that it's very short! Nothing wrong with that though ...

Hi there kasimkaey, Just stopped by to have a look at your piece here. I think, at the base level, what you have here is an interesting concept. Writing this ...

Hey Lauren! Always a pleasure to read your work, your writing is very enjoyable. I quickly skimmed through Eli and Stella's reviews as well and I didn't feel I had ...

Hi Eli! Thought I would pop by and have a look at your story here. I think it's pretty cool that you just took a prompt and came up with ...