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The concept of this story is cool - I'm always a sucker for a good utopian future short - and I think it's pretty well written, too, so congrats on ...

I really have no idea what's even going on here. I don't. My first reaction was that maybe English isn't your first language. If this is the case, I know ...

Hello! Firstly, I'd like to say that you captured the fine line between sanity and insanity incredibly well - I know because I'm there now, and I assume you captured ...