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Hey. The story has a good idea, but i agree with everyone above me, it is very rushed. I found it hard to grasp everything that was going on because ...

I liked this poem. It did a great job with conveying how much the speaker cares about the other person. My favorite part is the image you give when you ...

I like this poem. I feel like it's about an itch, but at the same time, that itch might represent something a bit bigger than just an itch. Something more ...

I loved this. Being in band myself, I get the feeling. I loved the personification of each instrument, each extremely specific to it's type, whether it was the jumping valves ...

wow... just... wow. i like it a lot. i really like how you used the parenthesis. like, extra thoughts, your thoughts that were in the poem. if this is real, ...

um... hmmm. where do i start? im guessing this guy is a general? in WWI or something like that. then again, with the slave raping it could be the Civil ...

wow, i really like this. Lil_Pau has a point that this is lyrics for a song, so it might go into lyrics. but, lyrics are only poetry that can comfertably ...

i really really liked this song. the idea behind it was very intriguing! and original, too. it made me think... what is somebody? who is a nobody? haha... sorry. as ...

its a cute song, and it has a meaning behind it... but it seems like we have to really dig to find it. i agree with some of the verses ...