Published May 14, 2010
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I like this poem.
I feel like it's about an itch, but at the same time, that itch might represent something a bit bigger than just an itch. Something more important, but still just there and annoying. I like the way you structured it, from an annoying, painless itch to something bigger, and maybe even contagious.
According to allmixedup, it even IS contagious. =]
Because that's the joy of pietry isn't it? You can hide that biggest problems in, well, the smallest itch.
Loved it.
Keep it up. =]
Danyelle
ha! this is funny because its true. Stupid little itches! They start as an Itch, become an irritation then a pain! They are sooo annoying! Now im getting itchy! Im sending a copy of this to my friends! (with your credit of course;)) Keep writing!