barefootrunner

Hi there! This piece was an interesting start to your novel, but there are a few issues that might need some work. Spelling and Grammar: You need a lot of ...

Hi there, sonnetsandvignettes, and a warm welcome to YWS! Please fasten your seat belt, sit back and relax, as your review is about to begin! I enjoyed this read :) ...

Ah ha! A new member! Welcome, welcome, and have fun at YWS :) I am barefootrunner and I will be your reviewer for tonight. So, the review, yes. I really ...

Hi mastersanskar! As promised, a review of Raindrops. As I am sitting here, it is raining outside and some drops are still trickling down my neck every now and then, ...

Hi there! Hey, this was something different! The moment I scrolled over this, my eyes practically crossed. Break up the blocks! They scare readers off! This was brilliantly written, in ...

Hi there! Well, this was enjoyable! Spelling and Grammar: He's a stranger to many, which is a fairly strange concept; you'd think /that/, since he's been going to the same ...

Hi Annii, I liked the story line and what you've been doing with the characters, but I think you still need some grammar work, so here are some of your ...

Hey there! After a long absence, I am once again reviewing. Specifics: Lucas jumped onto the thicker branches and bounded across the forest honing in on the commotion. A comma ...

Okay, here to review! Specifics: Okay, you have very good spelling and grammar, but your comma usage can be a little questionable at times. Let's take a look at these: ...

Hi there! After my long absence, I have returned and am reviewing once more! Specifics: “I’ve been worrying, that we all live our lives in the confides of fear” I ...

Okay, review time! Spelling, grammar and nitpicks: You need a bit of work here! Anne and her twin sister Clara had been frolicking in the wheat fields on the day ...

Hi there! Review time! This was a very different story which required my rusty cogs to turn, and backwards too! Congratulations on making a rewind of a simple idea fascinating! ...

Okay, here is your review! Spelling, grammar and other nitpicks: Very good, here. Almost nothing wrong! They drank icy stream water from the cup of their hands I think you ...

Hi there! Here to review your piece! Spelling and Grammar: Very little error in this field. But look at this: The people of Merlasia never have a reason not to ...

Hi there! Yay! Another Clockwork piece! Firstly, Spelling, Grammar and other Nitpicks: ‘If you’re really interested, I think Professor Waldman wrote a paper on dualism and Descartes that was publi