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'When "Once upon a time" begins with no "happily ever after." That was my favorite part of the whole thing. This poem is really well-written though, in my opinion. When ...

I liked this.. It flowed really well :) It changed moods towards the end, but it worked.. [quote]Ecstatic, she leaps from the pyre of her maker Like right here, she's ...

This is so.. What's the word to use here? Maybe cute? Sure, I don't know. This is one of the sweetest, most well-written poems I've ever read, and it was ...

This is beautiful :) Normally, I'm not one for romatic poems, but the title caught my eye and I HAD to read it. I love this. This part was my ...

Hi there :) So, I really like this poem. You used good imagery, and I could definitely visualize the little girl trying to catch the butterfly.. Like, right her for ...

I really liked this... Although there were some cliche words like "blue eyes, frozen water, dark brown eyes, and melted chocolate," it is a very well written poem. Most people ...

I love this.. SO MUCH. This part's true with a lot of girls because lots of guys are stupid :) I hate your stupid friends. Every time I step into ...

I really liked this one.. To me, it was ALMOST remorseful? If that's the word I'm looking for. I don't know, but I liked it. The structure really stood out ...

When I hear a country song, One thought comes in my head. Just one more twangy baritone, And I'll soon be dead! They like to sing 'bout heartbreak, And other ...

Hi, Angus! First off, I love how you divided the poem into three stanzas according to past, present, and future. It made the flow a lot better, and also easier ...

I really like the imagery you used in this poem. However, can a bird really sound feral? I wouldn't think so, but that's just my opinion. Maybe in yours, a ...

My favorite part of this whole poem, and the part that really caught my eye, was where it said I Will beg, plead, and bargain with God Saying, "I didn't ...