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Re: Beastling : Chapter 1
Very good! The only problem I had was at the beginning. With the womens lips crashing or something but other than that a little more detail would be nice.
Jul 30, 2015 -
Re: The Shifter
Your details were on point and I feel like you captured a readers attention really fast along with it being very effective.
Jul 30, 2015 -
Re: Geniturams
I think your opinion on the formatting is correct but other than that its fabulous.
Jul 30, 2015 -
Re: The Day The Sun Went Dark
I think this was extremely interesting and its normally very hard to catch my attention in a book but you did so Good Job! Keep writing this! :)
Jul 28, 2015