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Re: Letter from my Grandpa
Hey! It's backroads, just finished reading and here to review! I love the approach you took to telling this story. I thought using grandfather's secret letters was a sweet, touching ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: Camping horror
Hey there Bookaddict- backorads here for a review! I really like the monsters you introduce, and I love how the toilet badger seems to come out of nowhere after a ...
May 26, 2016 -
Re: The Heart of a Warrior ch. 2
Hey there, sorry it took me forever to get back to you! I'm so happy to see more of the exposition! Your story sounds interesting, and I can't wait to ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: The Heart of a Warrior ch. 1
Hiya, I'm finally back! I absolutely love the imagery you used while describing this scene! It was captivating to read, I thought you did a great job bringing your characters ...
Mar 8, 2016 -
Re: In the Rain
Hey Squidhater! backroads here to review! It's been a little while since I've done this so please bear with me! I really loved the story you had! It's tragic, and ...
Mar 2, 2016 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 5: What Lay Behind The Doors
It's backroads here again for a review! I love how you're peppering details in about Eloise and her life in to this chapter! Why is her aunt the one to ...
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 1: Waves
Hey MadWriter! So I know I promised this days ago, sorry for the delay! Better late than never though! Honestly I think you did a fantastic job with this! You've ...
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 4: A Lot of Introductions (To Eloise's Horror)
Hey MadWriter! Sorry for the delay, but I'm finally here to review! So once again you've come up with amazing characters and have done a great job showing us their ...
Dec 11, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 3: Ellington Academy
Hey there, backroads again! I'm loving the character development and how you have Penelope and Matthew interact with Eloise! Can't wit to see what's in-store as far as friendships go. ...
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 2: The Train of Memories
Hey there! backroads here with a review! I love your style when writing this! You have such a natrual flow to your narration, and I love how your slowly find ...
Dec 3, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 6.1 - Intermission]
You have an interesting concept here with introducing the idea of a lone warrior, but like Carlito, I was left really confused. Though in hindsight this makes more sense, I ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: My Life in a Bizarre Town: Chapter 2
backroads here again! Loving the progression of the story, you have a great knack for characterization, and (assuming Haru is fine after this) I can't wait to see what is ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: My Life in a Bizarre Town: Chapter 1
Hey kman, backroads here. Happy Review Day! First off, I love how you slip in the twist at the end! I was not expect that what-so-ever, and hadn't even thought ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 5: Fight on the Train
Hey LordZeus, backroads here! Happy Review Day I love the fast-pace of your book! Something's always happeing, and you're really keeping your readers on their toes, as far as I ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 5.3]
Hey again! I didn't notice much in this part either, and some of it is kind of the same thing as in the last part: bad light which was originally ...
Nov 29, 2015
