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Firstly, I never went to writing camp :P and secondly... that's the point! I want to go to writing camp :(

Just curious, is there a certain way you have to right a fable, this is my first attempt. Does a fable have to be written in any specific way, like ...

Jimmy, you can't illustrate something by being it. Our reactions aren't anything to do with how much we love or hate the character - I didn't even realise there was ...

Well, if I'm forced to change the name of the character just to suit your whim, I won't be happy - I think you're just trying to spoil the party.

Oh, yes, and... more! all new, mostly-never-before-seen Chapter 3! And believe me, you've got Imp to thank for bugging me :P Enjoy: It was a ragged band of soldiers that ...

Hah, you're truly something excellent :)

I reiterate that I love you all (yes, pig, even you!) for your advice and comments XD To heart, indeed, are they taken! Obliged, yes... :P Ta.

But leaving it the same would be like me describing a wedding and funeral in the same tone... why have variation if you can't use it? That's the idea, at ...

Silly Pig :P Look again until you figure out what it means. Then you'll see why it switches styles and imagery...

You have to write your own sermon, gummy :) that's the message. Part of it, at least.

Eh, the effect of trying to switch from a human point of view to a God's eye view kind of mode. Didn't work for you, I guess... that makes me ...

Yeah, that's my fault :) it's for Nate. That might make things clearer for the old guard.

Sorry I don't live up to your standards, Brad :) few of us do, I think. The idea was to make the first section choppy, slightly awkward and prosaic; it ...

So, I thought I'd bump this because I was considering sending it off for publication and was looking for a bit of response. And to say that xanthan's my hero ...

Much better! I think you need to reword the first line of this new bit (two is too many for 'their' :)) but altogether an improvement. My advice to you ...