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Re: Him
Thanks, I appreciate it. :) I need to find more things to write about... runnin out of ideas....ugh. ha.
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: Him
Thanks. And yaah i will totally look into that. :)
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Him
Thanks. But the reason why its not as deep as it should be is because i havent felt that deep yet. You see? I cant write it cause i havent ...
Aug 26, 2009 -
Re: Dancers
Wow...its beautifull......i love it! :)
Aug 15, 2009 -
Re: Strained Smile
It is a very pretty poem. :)
Aug 14, 2009 -
Re: the funeral
Well thank you!!! ha. :P
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: the funeral
Well thank you!!! ha. :P
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: the funeral
Hey thanks June, and don't worry you weren't harsh. I needed critisim. Ha. I see your point too. Thanks again! I will try harder next time. :)
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: Paper Dolls
Hey .... I like your poem. I have no criticism(honestly I don't know how to give it:P) But yeah. ha. I think its really good.
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: One Night of Mistakes
hey i dont have any criticsm only because im still being criticized. ha. i like the poem. and yaah hopefully people wont be so stupid.
Jul 24, 2009
