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Hi! Well, more than anything to criticize, I think I have more questions for this piece. First off, brilliant descriptions, you really manage to make us see this destruction in ...

Hullo~ Going to review really quick! Since I always start off with grammar, please don't be offended! I remember, that’s the big problem her. I think you mean here . ...

Hullo~ Hope this review helps. Just because there were a little nitpicky grammar errors, I'm going to talk about those first: It was a gorgeous time of year and my ...

LOL. I knew it was going to be something like this when I got your text... And, to make things worse, I'll update you on our ice cream adventures so ...

Woah. Well, I just want to say that I really enjoyed this piece. You manage to pack a lot of emotion in such a short story! Your style was very ...

Just a warning, this is going to suck. Because I'm horrible at analyzing poetry. Oh well. First of all, "kuya" is from what language? Forgive my ignorance! :0 "You make ...

Hullo, going to review this work. It's nice, and starts off strong, but since grammar errors distract a reader, I'm going to touch on a few first. Sadly when a ...

Oh damn. Lol, I wanted to see some romance, being a girl I was more idealistic, but this story just kicks it right out of me. I think its so ...

I hate poetry since it makes me have to think so deeply. This poem is just sort of tragic, because to be honest, trains are sort of a symbol of ...

Hi! Just going to give a quick words about this piece. %u201CHey, Liza,%u201D I said softly to my horse. %u201CYou feel up for some jumping?%u201D I thought this was a ...

This was certainly an eye turner. Just to get the technicality out of the way, I believe there was a grammar error in this line: But to answer your question ...

This was a great story that was simple in its own elegant way! I don't really have anything to review, but there are a couple of questions I just want ...

Hi! As someone who's just gone through this, I'll try to give you some advice: The first point you need to really decide, is WHAT are you trying to show? ...

Oh wow, didn't imagine to find this here :) I think the first observation that I had was that it was very honest (almost brutally) and you don't see that ...

Can i take the credit for inspiration??? :) I liked your sentences that were worded craftily. For instance, the part where he turns around quickly but slowly. And also the ...