ayushinav

Hello Rose, Thanks for your comments. I am glad you liked it, and you could feel the emotions...

Thanks, @Aranya for taking out time to read and review this. First of all your relation to the shadow was really impressive. Though I was reading the book "Owning your ...

Yeah, I tried to follow that rule. And yeah, that one quotation mark you mentioned was unintentional. Have edited it now. Thanks @Andreknorpp for reading, and your appreciation.

Hi, Thank you for your review. I'm glad you like it, and I really appreciate your efforts in going through this so deeply. I shall take care of the things ...

Thanks for your review, Elinor. I really wanted to include the scene where the narrator is upset over the peril his job is in but thought it would deviate the ...

Thank you for your comments! Glad to know that you enjoyed the poem and got a good impression of what I was trying to tell. Once again thanks for your ...

Thanks for your appreciation and your comments!

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Hi @mechasvi969 A really nice piece of work, you surely did give me a motivation to work hard when things get hard, but I'd like to emphasise on some points. ...

Cool, take care next time! :D

Hello twasif, ayushinav here for a quick review. I found your piece really interesting. It was short but nice. I'll talk of the characterisation first. I have issues with the ...

Thanks, Greymatter for the review. Deeply appreciate the fact that you read and reviewed it so sincerely. XD I intend to answer your questions over Discord. :) See ya there.

A Fearful thanks for your review, :D The questions you put up, in the beginning, are not intended to answer, well, to keep things a bit ambiguous and mysterious. Also, ...

Thank you Querencia for your review. Glad that you liked it. You mentioned that the presence of rovers confuses you about the setting of the story, well it could be ...

Thanx for the feedback, I'll keep that in mind.

Thanx for your review! Glad that you like it and I won't be clearing the confusion regarding the italicised 'you' as it tells me that I am somewhere lacking in ...