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Hey @Traves This is more of an interpretation than a review, I guess. The first stanza talks about you hurrying past the 'ghost' of know faces, which gives a negative ...

Hey @Raichu13. You seem to be having a wonderful lockdown :p Here's my review for your story. Firstly, the metaphorical mask was brilliantly played out, though I feel that you ...

Hi @rudrAbhinav, It was a touching story you wrote. As I have observed in your previous works, I see that you have a wonderful ability to bind the readers with ...

Hi Raelyn, That was one really good story. I really liked how you defined all the characters, and the interaction between them was really great. The flow of your story ...

Hi @mechasvi969 A really nice piece of work, you surely did give me a motivation to work hard when things get hard, but I'd like to emphasise on some points. ...

Hello twasif, ayushinav here for a quick review. I found your piece really interesting. It was short but nice. I'll talk of the characterisation first. I have issues with the ...

Hello LadyAstella, Well, its something sort of funny that you, being 14, are giving advice for the whole teenage years that extend up to 19. Let's go pointwise. ONE! It ...

Hello Yaslynnj15, ayushinav here for a review. Well, it seems like Zoey is out on some adventure or is trapped in some mysterious place and she has written a diary ...

hello @aulyasela3597, ayushinav here for a review. First of all, your work has a grammatical issue. Something you need to sort out as it dilutes the quality of your work. ...

Hello @WanderlustStardust Really a wonderful piece of work. Thumbs up for how you connected each part of the story, in a chronological order, and still diving into the flashbacks at ...

Hi there, I am here to review your story. The idea of the story was really good. The best thing was that it showed how robots can rule us, not ...

Hi Winged067, I am here to review your story. I see there's a great thing out there for #067. The story does sound interesting. What I understood was that there ...

Hello @GreyMatter, You started off really well. The selection of words, the setting of plot, amazing. You didn't name your character but I don't feel it effected your story in ...

Hello @GreyMatter! This untitled story is really good as a narration. The flow is soothing but I would have liked it more if there were some twists. One of the ...

The story "No rebellious activity will be tolerated" is a fictional story against the backdrop of a rebellion that depicts the struggle that the family members of the rebels, or ...