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Hi! Ayelen here! I loved the middle to end bits where I could really feel the nausea and dizziness. I'm a little lost on when your character ingests the drugs, ...

Awww! This is an adorable poem. I love the line repetition at the end of each stanza. It was like a little romp through a morning to read. I might ...

Really good! I love the descriptions and characters. You summed them up nicely in this short story. I think it's a great concept. Here are some things I noticed- You ...

This is a very interesting story! I like the premise of it, and the descriptions are well done. There are some places where commas could be added, and one or ...

:) I'm sorry but I couldn't see Rose with either of them so please let Theo and Van end up together *gay panic* awww it would be so cute if ...

I really liked reading this! The way you rhymed made it feel very melodic, almost like a lullaby. It's very lyrical and pretty. I could visualize the entire scene very ...

I am so pumped to find out what happens next! I agree with stygianmoon17 on a lot of the points. Some grammar mistakes, but I was only partially bothered. I ...

Ooh, I really do like this! To expand on what wolfyuwu said, I agree that this was quite long. I I had trouble trying to finish. I felt as if ...