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Okay, I swear I responded to this, but it doesn't show that I did. Thank you so much for the review! Also, yeah I usually don't use punctuation with these ...

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Oh my gosh thank you! Also, yeah I agree there's not much feeling in this. Normally I write this stuff in the middle of the pain and emotions, but at ...

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oh no, it bothered me this whole time, I just couldn't figure out a better solution!

Also you%u2019re right, it%u2019s the opposite don%u2019t judge a book. I based it off of my experience with toxic friendships and such and how on the outside and to others, ...

Okay I%u2019m scared my phone will cut some of this out but I changed the line and I want your review on if it%u2019s better or worse

Okay, I thought so! I was confused at first and it didn't click with me because your writing is so lovely that I wouldn't think you had stanza issues, but ...

Also if you meant to not have structure to go with the whole faults thing, that's totally fine too. I just now realized that the way it's structured could've been ...

Wow, that's such a great tip! I don't know why I didn't think to do that sooner. Thank you so much!

Oh my gosh, thank you so much for all of these suggestions! This poem was in first draft mode and I'm so glad I put this on here. Your constructive ...

Hi! So, with the enemies thing: the way I did it was for the purpose of showing how my lover turned to a friend then to an enemy then to ...

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Thank you so much! I'll try adding more figurative language in the future!