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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Horizon

    Hey MapleWay! I really like reading about nature and especially when it comes to poems. There's just so much to learn and appreciate and emotion of course. This too was ...

    Mar 24, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Natural

    Hey illy7896! I have to say, you tried to bring out some really strong ideas. I really liked that and your work is cool. That being said, I felt there ...

    Mar 24, 2021
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: Untethered

    Hey MaybeAndrew! I have to say this is amazing! The imagery was really beautiful, especially the initial part, one could almost imagine themselves in the bakery. The suspense you kept ...

    Mar 24, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Voices

    Hey BrokenHeartsAri! I have to say you brought out quite a lot in just these lines. I really liked the way you expressed something that most people deal it. I ...

    Mar 23, 2021


He looks like a turtle who's been through the Vietnam war.
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